Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, August 10, 2015

REVAMPED-Hook Kids on Readng


HOOK KIDS on READING
WILL NOW FOLLOW THE PATH BELOW.

BOOK. . . News
WRITING. . .Ideas
MARGOT'S. . . Thoughts
W-H-A-T-E-V-E-R  Grabs My Interest. 


Hold onto your hair, mates,
not even The SHADOW Knows! 

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PINTEREST-
*Teacher Classroom board: With the new school year breathing down our necks, I have added a whole bunch of fun help and advice onto this board.   DIVE IN!! 

*Teckie Help:
Windows 10 is now being downloaded. A cool Freeby-at least for a year.  Get the Scoop from KIM KOMANDO. The GOOD - the BAD - and the UGLY!  Then decide if Win 10 is for you.

*Gardening--Parenting and Family--Home School:
These, and many other of my boards offer great help, advice, and pure fun items and articles. 



I posted this on Facebook yesterday, and received a GINORMOUS LACK of comments.
I have been at this writing for children game for well over 20 years, so I am no cute young thing!
I am beginning to wonder if the plethora of self published books for the genre I write, has made rising to the top, being noticed, and actually selling books, a no win proposition.  I do have another MS in the wings, but I am seriously considering letting it slide.

The buying public has so many choices these days.  I wrack my brains on a daily basis, for new and intriguing ploys that might grab a reader or two--a review or two. Yet I am not getting the readership I want for my books.  All my fellow writers are on Facebook etc doing the same thing. Without spending like a drunken sailor, for professional promotional help, how do we get our books into the hands and minds of today's kids?  Schools and Skype are an option I have mined deeply.  My kids and family are not interested in spreading the word--busy with their own needs.

So now  I am considering retirement--actually spending quality time with my dear husband and enjoying our garden.  Having the time to read some of the wonderful new books I keep adding to my Pinterest boards--both for adults and kids.

                                              Hence the 'CRY' for help you see below.





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Books for Kids
Skype Author Visits--Manuscript Critiques
http://www.margotfinke.com  

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Thursday, March 13, 2014

Introducing THE PROMO QUEEN!


Today I am introducing my


NEW PERSONA!


In the past I have been a -


WIFE
MOTHER
WRITER
SALESWOMAN
AUTHOR VISITING LOCAL SCHOOLS
SKYPER TO SCHOOLS WORLD WIDE 
(time zones permitting)
BLOGGER
SOCIAL NETWORKING
(One woman book promotion)


and now 
 TRUMPET BLAST PLEASE. . .

My new persona is

the
"PROMO QUEEN"
Extraordinaire




You may NOW  drool over my flagship logo.




More to come!


I have been in training for this for years.


DESPERATION forced me to ACT NOW!

I want kids to READ my BOOKS

I WANT

Parents
Aunts
Grandmas
Uncles
Friends 

And the kids old enough to spend their pocket money to 
BUY - LOVE - RE READ 
and thoroughly enjoy the stories I have written.

AND I WANT TO SEE IT ALL HAPPEN BEFORE I KICK THE BUCKET
AND GO TO THAT GRAND WRITING ROOM IN THE SKY!


Make sense to YOU?



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Sunday, February 10, 2013

How to - GRAB READERS BY THE THROAT!



THE IDEA
You long to write a terrific book. . .
You have an idea. . .
You have some time. . .

What's so hard about thinking up a plot,
plus some great characters, and mixing
them all together into one wonderful story?



You just KNOW you can
Grab Readers by the Throat!


Sigh. . .   Before you put finger to keyboard, please think about how you felt when you were  ripped off by that El-cheapo plumber, mechanic and repair dude.  So please, don't do the same thing to people who love to read.  Let me guide you in the ways go good writing that is tight, terrific, with not a "waffle" in sight - all safely in the kitchen, where they belong, looking for the maple syrup.

Network among other writers and pick their brains.  Join a good critique group.  Their writing feedback  and support will be a godsend in times of rejection - and there will be many.  Read a bunch of books in the same genre you intend writing.  This will give you a feel for the genre, and an idea of what publishers want.

If it has been a while since Ms. Writeit rapped you over the knuckles for that rash of commas, and those 4 line compound sentence, take a refresher writing class.  Basic skills are vital.  With that under your belt, you are ready to tiptoe into the morass of plot and characters.  

What the heck is tight writing?Editors say you must have it. There are tight shoes, tight schedules, and tight budgets. Everyone knows what those mean. However, mention tight writing, and many of you scratch your heads. I'm hoping that by the time you reach the end of this, tight writing will no longer be a mystery.
Focus Is The Key:
Keep your focus on what moves the story along. Avoid side paths that hijack your plot and take the story nowhere. Rough out an outline of your idea - beginning, middle, and ending.  Keep an eye on the small details.  Good pace and tension building are harbingers of tight writing and a great story.  Powerful verbs, evocative adjectives, and terrific dialogue promise your story will be a winner.  Never use 10 limp and overused words, when 5 powerful and active ones do a better job.  Use your Word Thesaurus to conjure up words that "speak" to your readers, and paint vivid mental pictures they will remember.

The Characters:
Understand your characters. Get under their skin. Make them so real they jump off the page. When you feel connected to your characters, there is less chance of them wandering off into gratuitous situations. Tight writers hold the reins.  Feed your reader snippets of back story in each chapter, so your characters grow richer and more compelling as the chapters flow past.  Give each character their own unique "voice."  Do this with words, mannerisms, and actions that come to be associated with each individual character. Never let your villain outshine your main POV (point of view) character.

The other VOICE: 
Yes, there IS another voice that is just as important - your  own writing "voice."  This is the way you string sentences, paragraphs and chapters together. Time, practice and experience come together at some point, and they create your writing voice or signature. It is the style you bring to each paragraph.  The way you write a tense scene.  Or a specific choice of words and actions.  If readers like the "voice" you bring to your writing,  you HAVE them by the throat!


*Writing Plots that GRAB Your Reader:
Keep a tight focus on where your plot takes the characters. Before you start to write, have a good idea of the beginning, the middle, and the end of the story. When your plot is up-in-the-air, your characters tend to wander off into unnecessary back-roads. You must invent pointless situations to push them back into the main plot. The result is wordiness (waffling on), rather than tight writing.  A good rule of thumb: If it does not move the story forward - CUT IT!
*The Sub-plot:
Focus on crafting a sub-plot that enriches your overall story.  Don't allow it to overshadow the main plot.  Secondary characters become more appealing when linked to an intriguing sub-plot. If you allow the sub-plot to wander too far a-field the story becomes bogged down. Tight writing is never long-winded.

Fiction Is Born When…
# 1 - You have a story in your head that you are eager to write.
# 2 - You have a bunch of characters in your head that tell you what to write.

Either way can give you a tight and terrific story. But only IF you keep your focus on what moves things along.


If You Write Like #1:
It would be a good idea to make a list of your characters, as well as a rough outline of the plot, and where it takes them: from chapter to chapter. Think about your main characters with great care. Do a family profile for each one. Even if you don't use all the details in the profile, you will have fun concocting it, and more importantly, feel much closer to them. They will really begin to "live" in your head. It will be easier to focus on them and their personalities -- fit them neatly into your plot. All this attention to detail focuses you, the writer, on what is important. Tight writing is always well focused.

If You Write Like #2:
Here the task of focusing on tight writing is harder. Think of your story as a herd of cattle stampeding through your mind. You have a prime story, but the ideas need to be herded, branded, and the sickly ones culled. You need to ride high in the saddle and crack the whip. Focus on disciplining the raw elements rushing around inside your head into a tight and cohesive story. A stampede of words is never called tight writing.

Highlighting The Small Stuff:
I wrote about the "biggies" first. Yet there are still many pitfalls that can reduce tight writing to a sea of rubble.

*Qualifiers and Adverbs:
These are often one-and-the-same. Go through your writing with Word Find (Control +F) and prune these pests. Hordes of words like, just, very and some, etc., throw tight writing out the window. Look askance at all adverbs. If your verb is good and strong, an adverb is usually unnecessary.  Occasional use is fine.  Adverbs have become a habit in our speech, and this tendency is often repeated in our writing.  Do you find yourself repeating a certain word more than once on every page? BE aware.  Use Find/Replace to hunt it down. Replace with an alternative. 


*Beautiful Descriptive Passages You Feel You Must Keep:
We writers fall in love with what we write. We hate to snip a word. If you must have that lovely descriptive passage, or lengthy detail, be ruthless - cut it back by one third. Remember, needless details sink tight writing.

Reiteration Is Not Always A Good Thing
At the top of the page you write about Jamie falling off a ladder and hurting her knee. You gave adequate details. Near the bottom of the page, you repeat this, using slightly different words. Check your pages for this type of unnecessary repeat. Often, writers are unaware that they double-dip information. Reiteration is useful when you want the reader to remember something that happened several chapters back. Keep it short-and-sweet. Jog the reader's memory, and then move on.
Avoidable reiteration is the opposite of tight writing.

Finale:
So there you have it. Tight writing from A to Z  - or at least a good beginning.
Tight will get you published. Tight will have you read. Tight will earn you royalties and accolades.

Tight writing will GRAB your reader by the throat!



Books for Kids - Manuscript Critiques
http://www.margotfinke.com


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Thursday, January 3, 2013

SELF PUBLISHING - Hell or Heaven?

There's only one way to tackle
SELF-PUBLISHING

TELL IT LIKE IT IS!
 Just because I look sweet and harmless - don't be fooled!
I'm one tough broad when it come to books and self- publishing.
ROAR-R-R-R-R!


So, let's break it down into your reasons for going this route in the first place.

and
MY REBUTTAL
  • You are fed up with the rejection, and waiting months-and-months to discover your book is unworthy.  And one bathroom papered in rejection slips is ENOUGH!
    Maybe there's a good reason WHY you keep getting those rejections
  • You think it will be a lot easier than snaring a traditional publisher.
    That noise is me rolling on the floor - hysterical !
  • You've read lots of books, and you can write a better story than most - you think!
    Would you ask a man with no plumbing experience or training to quell the flood in your basement?  NO you say!  Then WHY think someone (you) without proper skills and knowledge, can write and self publish a successful book?
  • Several publishers with nice looking websites are vying for your business.      
    Oh dear! RUN to the closest Predators and Editors, and dive in to save your sanity and your money!

 ARE YOU BEGINNING TO GET THE PICTURE?

 


Understand that the competition is fierce. Meet the competition. Every person in the world is absolutely sure they can write a best seller. Most have no talent and no clue - but that doesn't stop them from writing and self-publishing and opus or two. If you want your book to rise like the cream in the proverbial milk jug, you have to master 4x things.

FIRST - Master the craft of writing well.
This takes time - patience - networking among published writers - picking brains - lots of rewriting,
and input from a really dedicated critique group.

SECOND - Editing - You can only do so much yourself. When you and your crit group feel it is as polished as you can make it, that is the time to shell out the bucks needed, and have a qualified person EDIT IT.

THIRD - Learn the tricks of the self-publishing game - or DIE a lingering death!
Take the time to research and mine the copious information available on many writing and self publishing lists. Ask questions, delve deep - especially if you want to print in paper as well as on Kindle, Nook etc. Ask those you know who they used, and who is the best in the field of self- publishing.  Research printers, paper, and prices, prices, prices! This is BUYER BEWARE territory.  No use crying later, if you didn't do your homework BEFORE you chose that !@#$ publisher, or stumbled through the process yourself, ill- equipped and in a funk!

FORTH - the art of promotion.
Remember one thing.  Your book will eventually be finished, edited and published.  BUT -  promotion never ends! It means searching for clubs, organizations, blogs, groups, bookstores, reviewers, interviewers, newspapers, schools, niche markets etc. These and MORE, are places where readers who might buy your book hang out.  Become a literary bloodhound. Develop a NOSE for tracking down potential customer sites. Make a name for yourself and your book in our present day Social Networking Jungle -  + create a SUPER bog. 



Learn how to write a HOT and succinct Press Release. Discover the gentle art of twisting arms and cajoling favors. Create cute bookmarks and business cards that spread the word - YOU ARE AN AUTHOR!  Track down the niche markets your book fits and be relentless. Send them that perfect Press Release. Follow up with a phone call. Pay a visit.  Like a great car salesman - never take NO for an answer.  Bribe them with freebies, your valuable time, or a writing competition might work - whatever it takes.

If you have them, conscript friends and relatives.  E-mail them cute promos for your book and where it can be purchased.  Ask them to send it to friends, and every Social Network they are on. Think out of the box! Virtual Book Tours, author interviews, and ordinary blog promotion has become a big YAWN!  And never forget your pages and profile on Kindle, Nook, and elsewhere.  UPDATE often.
 

WOW! Are you out of breath reading this?  I am, just writing it all. Am I doing all this stuff for
"The Revenge of Thelma Hill,"  the ghost mystery I self-published, with help and cover art from  Agy Wilson? 

Hell no!  Are you out of your mind.  I'm telling you how it SHOULD be done if you were 20 years younger, and 30 pounds lighter than me. Blimey, mate, I have palpitations just thinking about all this - and I only hit the high points!



 

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If you enjoyed this, 
Next week we'll dabble in the waters of how to . . .

WRITE A BOOK THAT
GRABS READERS BY THE THROAT.

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Sunday, September 23, 2012

SAVE THE LEMMINGS - a "fishless" YA TALE.


Today it my pleasure to introduce
an intriguing YA book titled,

"Save the Lemmings"
Nothing "fishy" about this story - promise!

Written by that talented and well published author of books for c
hildren,

Kai Strand


Kai Strand writes fiction for middle grade and young adult readers. Her debut novel, The Weaver, was a finalist in the 2012 EPIC eBook Awards. The Wishing Well: Another Weaver Tale is set in the same storytelling village as The Weaver. She is a (very lucky) wife, and the mother of four amazing kids. The most common sound in her household is laughter. The second most common is, "Do your dishes!" She and her family hike, geocache, and canoe in beautiful Central Oregon, where they call home. 

I can appreciate her love of Oregon, because apart from loving Kai's books and the way she writes them, I also live in Oregon and love it.


About  SAVE THE LEMMINGS:
8th grade inventor, Natalie Isabelle Cailean Edwards is the N.I.C.E. girl who finishes last with the kids in school. Sappy inspirational phrases and monochromatic outfits have all but her best friends wrinkling their nose at her. When Natalie’s invention, the Texty-Talky, goes nationwide, she becomes an overnight sensation. Suddenly her days consist of photo shoots and interviews with little time left for her friends. A local reporter shatters her good-girl image by reporting a graffiti incident, and the media launches into a smear campaign. It is so bad, even her friends start to believe the stories. Will Natalie be able to overcome the lies being printed about her? And will she SAVE THE LEMMINGS?

*Did you ever feel like a Lemming when you were a teen?

I think if you had asked me then, I would have answered no. But when I look back on my middle and high school years I think I spent way too much time worrying about blending in, fitting in - NOT standing out in a crowd. If I had to do it over again (God forbid!) that is what I'd want to do differently. I wouldn't want to worry so much what other kids thought. I'd spend more time doing what I enjoy - even if it wasn't considered cool.

*What tempted you to write a YA WITH Lemmings in the title?

Two ideas melded together to make this book. 1) I wanted a main character who did something extraordinary and who was first revered by the media as a whiz kid, an example, a hero, but then they twisted that into something ugly in their never ending quest for a bigger and better headline. Frankly, I think this happens WAY too much in today's society and I feel that we (as the media consumers) fuel it by eating these gossipy stories and ridiculous 'reality' t.v. shows up. 2) I wanted the popular saying of 'being a lemming' to play a part. As I was drafting the book, I did a little research on lemmings and learned that the common assumption that lemmings blindly follow each other off cliffs in hordes was false, and that a huge company facilitated the lie back in the 50's with a documentary they produced. CRAZY! That fed into my theme even better than I'd ever expected. It is amazing the things we will just blindly believe!

*Did you need to do a lot of research about 8th graders + the media? 

The 8th grader part was pretty easy. I have four kids. My youngest is just now entering 8th grade, but over the last six years I can safely say I've known an 8th grader or two. I did read a lot of articles and watch a lot of news and tabloid shows to see how the media would report a story. I took particular interest in ongoing stories so that I could see how they treated the subject of the story as it unfolded. 

*Do you ever plan to write for an adult audience?

I do have a couple of story lines that are adult focused, but I don't have any immediate plans to write them. I really enjoy writing for children, and consider myself so lucky that I am writing shorts for younger kids (www.knowonder.com), novels and the occasional short in middle grade and young adult. Each audience has it's specific needs in an appropriate story, which keeps my brain busy enough sorting it out.

*Are your family supportive of your writing – or mainly uninterested?

My family is AWESOME! My husband is my go to guy for when I have a plot issue I can't quite figure out. My kids will sit (and have!) for hours while I read my stories aloud to them. They answer questions I pose, they ask questions or offer input that is helpful. But the single most important thing they do is ask for more! "Have you finished the second book in the series yet?" or "Have you worked on that friendship story lately?" Recently my son asked if I could reread one of my longer novels. My first thought was that I didn't have the time, but then I realized that too soon he'll be grown and gone, and I won't have him to read to. So I worked it in. Each evening, the family sat down in the living room and I read several chapters. Really, a writer can't ask for a more supportive family than I have! 

*Are you in a critique group, and if so, did their feedback prove helpful?

I've been a long time member of an online critique group. I love them. They offer great input to the development of my story and they provide me a safe place to whine. Seriously, they are so good for my mental health!

*Are you planning to write more books with this Lemming theme – a series maybe?

I've always intended SAVE THE LEMMINGS to be a stand alone. The tween novels I have published with Guardian Angel Publishing, The Weaver and The Wishing Well: Another Weaver Tale, are stand alone stories set in the same storytelling village. My upcoming young adult novel, King of Bad, is the first in a series.

*What do you think a book's plot and characters must have to GRAB the red hot interest of this teckie minded younger generation.

That is a great question. Good pacing is critical for keeping their attention. No saggy middles or else they'll switch their reader over to a game of hangman! Also, relate-ability. The kids must be able to relate with the issue the characters are dealing with. You can wrap it in a science fiction setting on Venus, but those aliens better be having a personality conflict with the head cheerleader or have an alcoholic parent or maybe the younger alien ripped his pants at school. But something has to be recognizable to your reader.

*Do you plan to publish a paper version later, or are you a die-hard ebook fan?

The print version is available now!

All the digital versions (Nook, Kindle, pdf) are also available through the publisher's website: http://www.featherweightpublishing.co/ShowBook.php?YA=KS_SAVE_LEMMINGS

 
*Tell my readers something about yourself that you have never shared before.  Funny or shocking, they lap it all up, mate.

I guess this is a good time to admit that I can relate to Natalie, the main character in Save the Lemmings, a little too well. I was such a prim and proper priss growing up, and my sister always teased me about it. She could - and did - belch the alphabet just to see me collapse into a pool of quivers. I couldn't handle anything that wasn't proper or that was outside the rules. I've loosened up a bit since, thank goodness.

Thanks for letting me visit, Margot!

It is absolutely my pleasure, Kai.  And I so envy you the interest your kids have in your writing.

To find out more about Kai’s books, download companion documents, find links to her published short stories and discover all the places to find Kai both virtually and in person, visit her website: www.kaistrand.com. She loves to hear from readers, so feel free to send her an email or visit her facebook page, Kai Strand, Author.  


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Thursday, April 19, 2012

CHILDREN'S BOOK WEEK - a Prequel.

Woo Hoo

Guardian Angel Publishing Authors
Will blog the 7 days of  Children's Book Week

May 7th - 13th, 2012 


as advertised on
BOOK WEEK ONLINE

http://www.bookweekonline.com/local.



A selection of Guardian Angel Publishing authors
will blog about all aspects of writing books for children -
Beginning with that first idea . . .
to HOT off the press!
Here is the line up of talent:


  
I will be posting daily on

"HOOK Kids on Reading." 

My daily topics will be as follows: 
 

Monday -  Virtual School Visits – Skype Makes it Happen
Tuesday - A Professional Critique – What to Expect
Wednesday  -  Classic Children’s Books – Both Old and New
Thursday - What Beginning Writers Need to Know
Friday  - Who Mentors Today’s Writes.
Saturday  - Blatant Promotion!  Be Warned
Sunday - Children’s Book Week Wrap UP – Unabridged Thoughts.


All you have to do is read our posts . . .  and ENJOY!


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