Thursday, March 22, 2012

"DON'T" - a Picture Book Kids Will LOVE!

I don't often do book promotions on this blog.
Yet I do help fellow writers by daily promo mentions on
Facebook, Twitter and GoogleX!

However,  I will make an exception for:

 
a children's writer of exceptional talent

Ann is a fellow Aussie.  
But she is legit: unlike me, she still lives Down-under!
Ann is one of the original members of OPUS, the critique group I founded years ago.  All the members are well published now, but we still keep in touch, and cheer each on to ever greater heights.  This time it is our turn to cheer Ann.

                                                               BIO:
Ann Harth, an award winning children’s writer, studied psychology in New York before moving to Australia to travel, build a home and raise children. Before becoming a full time writer and tutor, she waited tables, bar-tended, picked strawberries and punched keys on various tills. She also spent many years working with children with special needs which is where some of the ideas for her stories originated.

As a writer of various genres, Ann has been published internationally. Her fiction and non-fiction children’s books are available in Australia, the USA and the UK. She has also written over 120 short stories for various magazines and educational programs
As a dual citizen of Australia and the US with over 20 years’ residency in each, Ann is comfortable writing for the international community. Her background and education supply her with an endless supply of characters, experiences and settings on which to draw.

When Ann isn’t writing or looking after their land and animals, she and her family are searching for new and remote places to camp, hike and explore. From her home in northern Australia, she works as a freelance writer, ghost writer, manuscript assessor and writing tutor. She lives with her family and an occasional orphaned marsupial.

First
Ann's new Picture Book. . .

Illustrated by 
Angelita Ramos
Soto Publishing 



Reviewed
by:
Vicki Stanton

Don't is a story that will ring true for young and old alike. Jackson's busy family is always telling him, 'Don't.' But as soon as he hears that word, he is immediately drawn to the forbidden and disaster inevitably follows. However, Jackson's school teacher Miss Connor prefers 'do'. This simple act boosts Jackson's feelings of self worth and even when disaster still ensues he is able to stay calm.


Ann Harth carefully selects her words and the reader is with Jackson all the way as his 'shoulders twitch and ... fingers tremble.' My particular favourite is 'my skin quivers like a horse with flies'. The text is filled with humour and though the story has a powerful message it never comes across as didactic.

Angelita Ramos's bright and colourful illustrations faithfully portray the text. She is particularly good at depicting Jackson's facial expressions. i could almost see his mind ticking away.


With its message of positive reinforcement and the encouragement of children, Don't would be especially useful within pre-schools and in early primary school as well as reminding all of us in contact with children that encouragement wins out every time.


·  ISBN-10: 0982171110
·  ISBN-13: 978-0982171110

Amazon (US and Australia)
Barnes and Noble


Now that I've blown Ann's trumpet a bit, let's get to the good stuff -

THE INTERVIEW!


Tell us a little about yourself.

Currently, I am juggling my time between writing my own books and stories, tutoring on-line writing courses, and working as an editor for an environmental consultancy group. I am married with two children, and live on a small property in rural northern Australia. I was born and bred on the east coast in the US, but when I finished college, I travelled, met an Australian, married him and have lived in this great country for over 25 years.

Why did you begin writing for children?

I had no choice. The stories were there, my children were there, and they simply had to meet. I started writing picture books when my kids were little and then, as they grew, my target audience seemed to grow older as well.

Who or what helped you most when you first began serious writing.

The person who helped me most at the very beginning of my career was Marg McAlister, my children’s writing tutor. She became more than a teacher, and believed in me and encouraged me when I thought I was finished. We have stayed in touch over the years, and I still feel like an excited child when I can tell her about one of my writing successes. Another group that helped me was my wonderful critique group OPUS. They are a group of talented and generous writers who took the time to give me valuable feedback on many of my children’s novels. I learned more from them than I would have thought possible.

If you had not become an author, what would you have been?

It’s hard to imagine. I worked with kids with disabilities for many years and also with the elderly. I might have found myself working along those lines.

What author, dead or alive would you love to meet – and why?

Stephen King, without a doubt. His books, though very different from mine in content, have always transported me into worlds that I felt were real. His ability to create characters, settings, and make me feel as though I'm a part of their world is inspiring. His memoir on writing is the most concise book on the craft of writing that I’ve ever read.

What advice would you offer someone just beginning a writing career

As many writers say, write every day. This might mean working on a novel or short story, journaling, freewriting or even writing a letter – but write something every day. This is what has always defined me as a writer. I have always felt that no writing is wasted, even if it’s not fit for another human being to read. If I write every day, I am a writer. When I don’t, I feel restless and flounder within my own doubts. One more piece of advise? Persevere. Writing is a never ending learning curve. Learn the rules, write from your heart and enjoy the process.

When is your next book due out, and can you tell us about it?

My next book, The Art of Magic, is a middle grade novel that should be out by the end of the year or early 2013. It will be published by Solstice Publishing, a company that creates printed books but is also moving quickly toward the digital world with ebooks. I’m attaching the cover (which was designed by my husband). The following is the blurb:
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Devastated and confused by his father’s death, Andrew abandons his painting and turns his back on those who care. A gift from his dying father sits abandoned in the corner of the kitchen until he meets Max, an aging and eccentric artist who paints only one thing – a specific 19th century cottage.  Through his friendship with Max, Andrew embarks on a quest to discover the importance of his father’s gift and whether Max’s obsession with the cottage is touched with magic – or madness.

 Coming Soon

  
Awesome cover, Ann.  Your husband is a treasure.
Best of luck with both these books, mate!!

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Monday, March 12, 2012

KEVIN SCOTT COLLIER - Children's Writer and Illustrator.

 Today I want you to meet  Kevin Scott Collier,  a very special man:

 Writer -  Illustrator - Animator -  Children's TV Host,
and Friend.

 Kevin Collier lives in beautiful Grand Haven, a quaint port city along the Lake Michigan shoreline with his wife and son. He has worked as art director for the daily newspaper there for 30 years. His lifetime interest in writing and drawing lead him to become a published author of youth fiction, chapter books and children's picture books. He has illustrated over 120 picture books for kids. Kevin says,  "Life is more than what you do, it's about who you spend it with. In that book, I am blessed, and life is good!"

If you need a talented and experienced art director, or you have a picture book that needs the perfect illustrations to  set off your story,  I can recommend Kevin Collier without reservation.  He has talent to burn, and he is inclusive - you are never left out of the artistic loop!

Kevin introduced me to Guardian Angel Publishing
and then illustrated Rattlesnake Jam, my first picture book with them.


Just a small sample of Kevin's cover art.
 




Kevin is also an award winning illustrator:

KEVIN SCOTT COLLIER'S art won
New York Book Festival 2008 First Place Children's Book- Monty the Traveling Cat.

KEVIN SCOTT COLLIER'S art won
The National Best Books 2008 Finalist- Picture Book-
BiC's Baptism


 See more of Kevin's fun and kid friendly art
HERE

Check out more about Kevin Collier


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Friday, March 9, 2012

5 Fabulous February Releases - by Guardian Angel Publishing.

5 Fabulous February Releases

from
Guardian Angel Publishing

Picture books that kids will want parents to read to them -
over-and-over again.


SLIME AND ALL


Author: Janet Ann Collins   Artist: Alexander Morris
The giant worm, Lump, lives on a farm but the other animals run away from him. He escapes to a town and meets Jake, who takes him to a park where he plays with other kids. This early chapter book for young readers encourages them to think about accepting those who are different.

THE CLOWN AROUND KIDS
The Clown-Around Kids have wonderful acts in the Rubadub Circus. All except Noodle, the littlest clown. One night, a lost pup appears, and Noodle trains him to do circus tricks. Noodle and Pipsqueak are a big hit. All goes well until a man arrives and demands his dog back.

LONELY LITTLE LEAF
Last oak leaf wants to fall from the tree but cannot. Many forest friends come along to encourage the leaf. The leaf does not realize photosynthesis is diminishing, changing the leaf from a beautiful green into a deep red. Once the transformation is complete, the leaf finally falls.

Author: Mary Esparza-Vela  Artist: Kevin Scott Collier
A tiny turtle crawls to the top of a hill to watch his friends play in the meadow. He imagines himself outside his shell, doing everything they do. When he falls asleep, he dreams that he is outside his shell, but things do not turn out as he imagined.

VIVIEN'S BEACH DREAM
Author/Artist: Roey Ebert
Vivien plans all year for the beach. She decides that she will never leave. She comes up with clever ways that she can stay at the seashore. Her mom reminds her of the things at home she will miss. Will Vivi come home or will she stay on the sand forever?



Lynda S. Burch, Publisher

Children's Books - 
written and published with
YOUR kids in mind

Guardian Angel Publishing

http://www.guardianangelpublishing.com
http://www.guardian-angel-kids.com   -   http://guardianangelfamily.blogspot.com/



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Thursday, March 8, 2012

R.I.P - L.A. Times KIDS READING ROOM

D.O.A.
 LA Times Kid’s Reading Room


 It is hard enough these days to 
HOOK Kids on READING. . .
Without newspapers like the L A Times
killing off the popular
KIDS READING ROOM.

FOR SHAME!!

I have permission to post these comments PLUS the student's letter below.

Clarissa Ngo, Founder and Teacher of Magic Pen Kids,
sent the following to the people notified regarding the
LA Times Kids’ Reading Room
news:

Hi everyone,
My students have been published in the Kids' Reading Room over 300 times since 2005, and written the main story nine times, so I have seen the inspiring effect being published in the L.A. Times has on children. I am very sad the Main Story is being discontinued and that only half as many poems will be published. I think if the L.A. Times wishes to lure kids to read the paper, the children should have more of a voice in the paper, not less.

            I am including a funny, touching letter from my student, Sydney, about the demise of KRR. Sydney says you can use it to save the Kids Reading Room.
        
           I have contacted a bunch of libraries in O.C. and L.A. about this issue.
           
          Clarissa Ngo - Teacher

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Dear Mr. Hartenstin and Ms. Thomson:

Now that the Kids' Reading Room is mostly gone, my thoughts slump in plain wooden chairs with not a hook to hang them on. The silence slithers. Cardboard plasters my tongue as the gray overcast clouds cling to the neurons of my mind.

I am stomping bull mad about it, with a scorching scarlet thunderstorm on my tongue. How can this be? The Kids' Reading Room is practically the only place a kid can get published!

Without the Kids' Reading Room, my life is an empty ice cream cone, I think as I gaze at the quiet midnight sky. Why? Why do they think puzzles would be better than stories? My thoughts curl into balls, crawl, then limp from my brain like tired old men into the lonely Arctic where nothing lurks.

Every time I was published, it became one of those warm sweet red velvet cupcake days, when your thoughts skip over fields of golden sunflowers and the sky is as clear as a sheet of aquamarine glass.

If you bring back the Kids' Reading Room, my thoughts would whirl in weightless wonder. It will be butterfly weather in my heart.

Sincerely,

Sydney, age 12 

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 So wonderfully written for a 12 year old, and so sad
there can’t be more markets that encourage
imaginative minds like this.



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Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Margot's MAGIC CARPET

Margot's MAGIC CARPET
A great ride for kids who are reluctant readers.  Find books with a WOW Factor.

Saturday, February 25, 2012

Writing Time Outs Really do WORK!

                                     "Writing Time Outs"
                            They Help You Polish Your Picture Book.
                          ( From my "Musings" column on the Purple Crayon )



What is a Writing Time Out?
No, it does not mean dumping your PB (picture book) manuscript on a chair in the corner for fifteen minutes! A writing Time Out means putting aside the PB manuscript you have slaved over: for at least a few weeks.  Let it marinate in a drawer, or in a folder on your hard drive marked,

                                                        "Time Out."


 Forget about it. Clear your brain of all traces of this PB
                                                       and begin writing something new.

Does Your Picture Book Need a Time Out?
It does, if your fellow critiquers offer conflicting advice. Or you tweak, change, and rework it so many times you lose focus. This is when a Time Out can be especially useful. Yes, doing nothing sometimes works wonders!

Or, when you feel there is something not quite right, but you can't put your finger on the problem. You need to view your PB with fresh eyes. So, give the pesky thing a Time Out. When you reread it, in a month or two, you will be amazed by what jumps out at you.

Your First Reread--Yikes, What Was I Thinking?

Problem areas abound. How come you couldn't see them before? You race to the computer, bring up the file, and begin to type. Your husband and kids ask about dinner. You offer a glassy stare while pounding the keys.

What You Found: and how to fix It:
The word nice appeared four times on the one page? There were way too many compound sentences. The main character's name was only mentioned once. And the mom seems more important than the kid character. Tighten! Tighten! Tighten! The Fix: Focus on crafting a great voice for that kid character. Cut back on what Mom says and does. But watch out: you don't want the word count (way less than 1,000) to balloon. Break out your trusty thesaurus. Use it to scrap those overused adjectives and weak verbs. Are four adverbs really necessary, or do most of them prop up weak verbs?

                                                   Now You're Cooking!


Your picture book is coming together with flair. You have cut unnecessary descriptions, worked in active and powerful verbs, and strengthened your main character. But wait! It is still too early to rush to the query letter stage. Another Time Out, plus clear headed nit-picking, will give your picture book exactly the right polish, and make it into an editor's must have PB.

The Second Re-read, and Minor Fixes:
Better! Much better. But still. . . The ending isn't quite perfect. And that one sentence near the end, where the loose ends get tied up, needs a more lyrical feel. Oh no! Are there enough illustration opportunities for a 32-page picture book -- approx.14 or 15? The Fixes: Solutions come easier now, because time away has sharpened your clarity and focus. Visions of a signed contract encourage you to keep tweaking, and make sure that your text offers a good number of illustration opportunities. Soon your picture book is as fine as you can make it.

Begin writing that query letter.

Why Do Time Outs Work ?


#1 Because they give your overloaded brain cells a rest.
#2 Putting the story out of your mind for a while allows a clear and focused re-read.
#3 Problems jump out at you when your brain reads words with clarity.

NOTE: A few days or a week won't give you the clarity you need. I have found that picture book Time Outs work best if given the minimum of a month's rest. Once your manuscript is buried in your bottom drawer or hard drive, do whatever is necessary to forget it. Take a class, get married, join a rock band, paint the house or get a divorce -- whatever works!

I use as many Time Outs as necessary. Keep doing them until your re-read finds nothing to tweak. This tactic works. Utilize Time Outs to help you shape a problem manuscript into a Picture Book That Sells!


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Friday, February 17, 2012

BOOK PROMOTING - Telling it Like it IS!!


Telling it Like it Is



 LEAVE A COMMENT -
 PLUS YOUR e-mail, and I will send you a FREE COPY
 of my kid's short, time travel adventure.  This PDF book 
has characters from my 3x latest books 
enjoying Down-under fun!

As well as listing my books, and the books of other terrific writers, I sometimes ramble on regarding what it takes for a writer to HOOK their reader.  Yet to hook readers, you first have to get known as a writer of books for kids.  And if you self publish, you must make sure that your quality of writing, layout, paper and art work, are UP there with the best.

BECOMING KNOWN:
There are some easy, cheap and effective ways to put your name out there where the reading public roams.  Don't wait until your book is published.  Get started months ahead of publication.  If you think writing that darned book, and finding  a publisher was hard, wait until you begin promoting your masterpiece. . .

USE A SIGNATURE on everything you send out:
Letters, e-mails, social networking posts, everything that you sign with your name.  Keep it short, sweet and simple - 2 lines, no more than three.   Name - up-coming title or business + blog or web address.  If you put your signature and links out there enough times, people will eventually register it, and actually click your link!  "Signature Advertising" is one of the easiest and most effective ways of creeping up on potential readers.  Yet so many of you never bother.

SET UP a BLOG or a WEBSITE:
 Blogs are easier for the technically challenged.  For ideas, poke around the blogs of friends, other writers, and famous people.   Begin simple and work up to awesome!   Add something new about you, your coming book, or your pet goldfish every week.  Learn the benefits of RSS, widgets, and linking to Facebook and Twitter - at the very least.  Go slow, take your time, and you WILL GET the hang of it.

PLUNGE INTO SOCIAL NETWORKING!!
I know! I know!  This stuff  looks horribly convoluted and involved for anyone over the age of consent, but trust me, you CAN master it.  Repeat after me: "I WILL FRIEND 100 people by summer."  First JOIN.  Then browse every day for a week or two - one hour minimum.   When ready, take the plunge and tell millions online about your upcoming book.  When your blog is respectable, put a link to it on your Facebook and Twitter pages.  Add a cover photo as soon as you have a cover to show.  Covers sell books.  One great cover can seduce thousands.

Begin small.  Concentrate on one social network at a time.  Once you have one of them under your belt, the others will be a snap.  I firmly subscribe to the theory of  "Computer Logic." Once you've conquered the basics on one, the rest will fall in line and cower.  March on to the next challenge.

THE BIGGIES:
The one page + Bio Press Release contains just the facts, mam!  TV, Radio and Newspaper dudes are rushed for time, and swamped with amateur hour versions of Press Releases they never bother to read. To GRAB interest, yours has to be short, simple, plus a cover and specific HOOK that catches their attention.  Go online, ask writing friends and enemies where you can learn, and find advice and Press Release samples that help you do it right.  And don't forget to create a cool book trailer - a tease that gets readers interested in your book.  If you feel this is not your teckie bag, then try Blazing Trailers.  I personally recommend them.  They do a fabulous job for a reasonable fee.

+ Cold Calls:
Yeah, just like insurance salesmen of old, you have to make cold calls about you and your wonderful book to schools, churches, bookstores, and any place else you want to offer a book reading, + some interesting chat about the how-and-why of you as a writer.   In the beginning, I suggest making notes.  This cuts the ers and ums, and those long pauses between words.  A list of what you bring to their table, and your stated willingness to fit in with their needs, will make for smoother going.   Set a fee early on, but be prepared to negotiate.  Negotiation is the name of the promotional/sales game, mates.



And. . . Virtual Book Tours and Reviews.:
By this time you should be well known in the writing circles of your specific genre.  They either love or hare your book, and those interested have already bought your book.  So, when choosing a Book Tour Venue, make sure it takes you and your book into new and virgin territory.  Sticking with writers' blogs is simply preaching to the converted.  You want to storm the battlements of bloggers that offer a whole new range of readers - ones that aren't sick of hearing about you and your book.

A terrific book review from a reviewer of substance, seen in a magazine, or some online eZine of excellent repute, is a gold standard that will sell your book.  Not every book is accepted by these Gods and Goddesses of Review.  One sniff of self publish, or e-book,  and most turn up their noses and stride away.  The average writer has to scrounge for reviews among the contacts they have forged during pre-publication times.  Writers are an incestuous lot.  They help those who help them.  So on your way up the publication ladder, take time out to help or promote those below or above you on the climb.  When your book is published, you can then call in your markers without a hint of guilt, because you have earned them.  YEA!!

THE TRICKY NITTY-GRITTY:
NEVER assume that the school, bookstore, or church bazaar you promised to entertain will follow through with what you both agreed upon. Check that every detail is in place, as previously agreed, in plenty of time to correct what they forgot - like the supply of books to sell, the table to display your books, the fliers to hand out or put in the store window, balloons to make you visible etc, etc, etc.

Take those fliers to the venue and put them in the window or on the church notice board yourself.  Send the teacher a nicely designed order form ( with your e-mail and blog link on it) so she can replicate it for her class to take home for their parents.  Make sure a day beforehand that the projector or screen is available. Check the time you are to be there, and the length of your presentation the day before - just in case. . .  Think if all these people as toddlers who need constant reminding and follow ups.

Well mates, I don't want to scare you too much, so I will quit now, before a stiff drink and aspirin are unnecessary. Just remember, writing for children is YOUR special gift, and you'll do what ever is necessary (short of immoral, illegal or fattening stuff), to see your books in their hands.


Your motto is:


 HOOK KIDS on READING
Whatever the cost to your sanity!


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